A change is needed in Part 10 of the second paragraph. The pronoun "we" should be changed to "us" to maintain grammatical correctness. The revised sentence would be: "I say forget the lawns and build a couple of convenient parking lots for us harried commuters!"
The sentence "You are comforted by the fact that your friend still has all of the same wonderful qualities that captured your affection when you first met." would be most consistent with the writer's purpose and intended audience if added between Parts 7 and 8 of the second paragraph. This sentence reinforces the idea that a good book, like a good friend, provides comfort and reassurance by retaining its positive qualities over time.
The highlighted word "think" in Part 4 of the first paragraph should be used in place of "thinks."
Deleting Part 3 would not help focus attention on the main idea of the first paragraph. Part 3 states that public opinion polls have proven valuable in the political process, which is relevant to the discussion of measuring public opinion. Removing this part would disrupt the flow of ideas and weaken the argument being presented in the paragraph.
The statement that best fits the writer's objective and target audience is "We commuter students don't drive to campus just because it's good to have a car around in case we want to go shopping or to the movies."
This phrase highlights the author's thesis that commuter students drive to university for practical reasons, such as juggling employment, family, and academics, as opposed to solely using their cars for recreational pursuits like shopping or going to the movies. It supports the author's claim that convenient parking spaces are necessary to meet the hectic schedules of commuter students.
Part 3 of the first paragraph is a nonstandard sentence. It lacks a subject and verb, making it an incomplete fragment. The sentence fragment "When you've finished the book" does not convey a complete thought on its own. It would need to be connected to a main clause to form a grammatically correct sentence.
Placing Part 9 after Part 11 in the second paragraph would make the sequence of ideas clearer.
By moving Part 9 after Part 11, the paragraph now flows logically from discussing the media's role in analyzing candidate positions to acknowledging that this approach may not be well-received, but it would still be a valuable service to the voting public.
