West B Test Writing: Revision and Editing Skills 5

Question 1

Which sentence demonstrates effective use of subordination to show the relationship between two ideas?

Accepted Answer

Because the power went out, we could not finish the project.

Answer

The subordinating conjunction 'because' clearly establishes a cause-and-effect relationship between the two clauses.

Question 2

A writer's paragraph lacks unity. Which sentence should be removed? 'Exercise improves cardiovascular health. It also strengthens muscles. Regular workouts can boost mood. My gym is open 24 hours.'

Accepted Answer

My gym is open 24 hours.

Answer

The sentence about the gym's hours does not support the paragraph's main idea about health benefits of exercise.

Question 3

Which revision best replaces the cliché in this sentence? 'The student worked hard as a bee to finish the assignment.'

Accepted Answer

The student worked diligently to finish the assignment before the deadline.

Answer

Replacing the cliché with specific, direct language ('diligently,' 'before the deadline') strengthens the writing.

Question 4

Which sentence correctly punctuates a direct quotation?

Accepted Answer

The teacher said, "Please open your textbooks to page fifty."

Answer

A direct quotation begins with a capital letter and is enclosed in double quotation marks, with a comma after the signal phrase.

Question 5

Which revision best addresses the logical fallacy of overgeneralization? 'All teenagers are irresponsible with money.'

Accepted Answer

Many teenagers are still developing financial literacy skills.

Answer

Replacing 'all' with 'many' and providing context ('developing financial literacy') makes the claim more accurate and defensible.

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West B Test Writing: Revision and Editing Skills 5