West B Test Writing: Revision and Editing Skills 3

Question 1

Which revision corrects the subject-verb agreement error? 'Each of the students are responsible for their own supplies.'

Accepted Answer

Each of the students is responsible for their own supplies.

Answer

'Each' is a singular indefinite pronoun and requires the singular verb 'is.'

Question 2

Which sentence contains a misplaced modifier?

Accepted Answer

The dog chased the cat, barking loudly.

Answer

In the first option, 'barking loudly' is placed after 'cat,' making it ambiguous whether the cat or dog is barking.

Question 3

A student's draft reads: 'It is important to note that the results were significant.' Which revision best reduces wordiness?

Accepted Answer

The results were significant.

Answer

Removing the empty phrase 'It is important to note that' delivers the key information directly.

Question 4

Which punctuation correctly sets off the nonessential clause in this sentence? 'My brother who lives in Seattle called me last night.'

Accepted Answer

My brother, who lives in Seattle, called me last night.

Answer

A nonessential (nonrestrictive) clause is set off by commas on both sides.

Question 5

Which revision best improves coherence by adding a topic sentence? 'First, review your notes daily. Second, practice with sample problems. Third, form a study group.'

Accepted Answer

Several strategies can help you prepare effectively for the exam. First, review your notes daily. Second, practice with sample problems. Third, form a study group.

Answer

A clear topic sentence introduces the purpose of the list and gives the reader context before the details.

West B Test Practice Test

West B Test Practice Test

West B Test Writing: Revision and Editing Skills 3