Which revision most effectively improves the coherence of the following student paragraph that jumps between unrelated ideas?
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A
Add more transition words such as 'however' and 'furthermore' between every sentence
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B
Reorganize sentences so each one builds logically on the previous, and remove sentences unrelated to the main idea
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C
Replace all pronouns with proper nouns to clarify references
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D
Break the paragraph into two separate paragraphs without reorganizing the content