WI Forward - Wisconsin Forward English Language Arts: Writing Questions and Answers 1 — Questions and Answers
Question 1: A student is writing an argumentative essay about the benefits of year-round schooling. Which of the following sentences would be the most effective claim for the essay?
- Year-round schooling is a topic that many people have different opinions about.
- This essay will explore the advantages and disadvantages of year-round school schedules.
- Implementing a year-round school calendar provides students with more consistent instruction and helps prevent summer learning loss. (Correct answer)
- Some students would probably enjoy having shorter, more frequent breaks throughout the school year.
Correct answer: Implementing a year-round school calendar provides students with more consistent instruction and helps prevent summer learning loss.
A strong claim for an argumentative essay must be debatable and clearly state the writer's position. Choice C presents a clear, arguable stance that can be supported with evidence, making it the most effective claim. The other options are either a statement of fact, an announcement of the topic, or a weak opinion without a strong argumentative basis.
Question 2: Read the following sentences from a student's narrative: (1) The old house stood on a hill overlooking the town. (2) I decided to go inside. (3) The door creaked open slowly. (4) A dusty smell filled the air. Which transitional word or phrase, if added to the beginning of sentence (3), would best improve the connection between the sentences?
- For example,
- Hesitantly, (Correct answer)
- In contrast,
- Therefore,
Correct answer: Hesitantly,
The word 'Hesitantly' is an adverb that describes how the narrator opened the door, adding suspense and showing the character's feelings. This creates a smoother and more descriptive transition between the decision to go inside (sentence 2) and the action of the door opening (sentence 3), enhancing the narrative's tone.
Question 3: A student is revising a paragraph in an informational report about the planet Mars. Which of the following revision goals is most important for this type of writing?
- Adding more descriptive adjectives and emotional language.
- Ensuring the conclusion restates the author's personal feelings.
- Developing a complex and suspenseful plot.
- Checking that all facts are accurate and supported by evidence from reliable sources. (Correct answer)
Correct answer: Checking that all facts are accurate and supported by evidence from reliable sources.
The primary purpose of informational writing is to convey factual information clearly and accurately. Therefore, the most critical revision step is to verify the accuracy of the information and ensure it is properly sourced. The other options are more appropriate for narrative or persuasive writing.
Question 4: Which of the following sentences uses commas correctly to set off a nonessential clause?
- The student, who aced the test, studied for hours. (Correct answer)
- The book that I am reading, is very interesting.
- My friend, Sarah is coming over later today.
- The car, that is parked outside is red.
Correct answer: The student, who aced the test, studied for hours.
A nonessential clause provides additional information that is not necessary to the main point of the sentence and can be removed without changing the sentence's basic meaning. Such clauses are set off by commas. In this case, 'who aced the test' is extra information about the student; the core sentence 'The student studied for hours' still makes sense on its own.
Question 5: A student is writing a narrative about their first time visiting a big city. To best establish the setting and mood, which of the following details should be included in the opening paragraph?
- A list of the tourist attractions the character plans to visit later in the story.
- A detailed explanation of how the character traveled to the city.
- The constant blare of car horns, the towering skyscrapers blocking the sun, and the hurried pace of the crowds. (Correct answer)
- A summary of the main conflict that will be resolved at the end of the narrative.
Correct answer: The constant blare of car horns, the towering skyscrapers blocking the sun, and the hurried pace of the crowds.
Effective narrative writing uses sensory details to establish setting and mood. The description of sounds (car horns), sights (towering skyscrapers), and the general atmosphere (hurried pace) immediately immerses the reader in the bustling, and possibly overwhelming, environment of a big city. The other options provide plot information but do not effectively build the setting.
Question 6: A student is drafting an email to their principal to propose a new after-school club. Which of the following demonstrates the most appropriate tone and language for this audience and purpose?
- Hey, I think we should totally start a new club. It would be awesome.
- I am writing to request your consideration for a new after-school club focused on coding, which would provide valuable skills to students. (Correct answer)
- You need to approve a coding club. Lots of students want it and it's a good idea so we should just do it.
- This is my proposal for a club. It's about coding. Let me know if it's okay.
Correct answer: I am writing to request your consideration for a new after-school club focused on coding, which would provide valuable skills to students.
When writing for a formal audience like a principal, it is important to use a respectful and professional tone. Choice B is the most appropriate because it is formal, clearly states the purpose of the email, and briefly explains the benefit of the proposed club. The other options are too informal, demanding, or vague.
WI Forward - Wisconsin Forward English Language Arts: Writing Questions and Answers 1
A student is writing an argumentative essay about the benefits of year-round schooling.
Which of the following sentences would be the most effective claim for the essay?