CAEL Writing: Extended Response Synthesis 3

Question 1

What does it mean to paraphrase a source rather than quote it directly in a CAEL extended response?

Accepted Answer

Restate the source's idea entirely in your own words and sentence structure

Answer

A true paraphrase fully restates the idea in the writer's own language and structure, demonstrating comprehension.

Question 2

In a CAEL extended response, how much of the response should consist of direct quotes from the source passages?

Accepted Answer

Minimal — quotes should be short and used selectively, with most ideas paraphrased

Answer

CAEL rewards demonstrating comprehension through paraphrase and analysis; over-quoting suggests the student is not processing the material.

Question 3

A student writes a paragraph that only restates information from the sources with no original analysis. What is the main weakness?

Accepted Answer

It lacks the writer's own critical engagement with the material

Answer

Extended responses require the writer to analyze and evaluate source information, not merely report it.

Question 4

Which transition phrase is MOST appropriate for introducing a synthesis that shows one source extending the argument of another?

Accepted Answer

Building on this point, Source B further argues that...

Answer

'Building on this point' signals that the second source adds depth to, rather than simply repeating or contradicting, the first.

Question 5

What is the recommended minimum word count for a strong CAEL extended response?

Accepted Answer

250 words or more

Answer

CAEL guidelines suggest responses of at least 250 words to adequately develop arguments and integrate source material.

CAEL - Canadian Academic English Language Practice Test