Bluebook SAT Test Writing and Language 5

Question 1

Read the following sentence and choose the option that best maintains grammatical correctness and stylistic precision:

"The committee's decision to postpone the merger, which had been negotiated over eighteen months and involved three separate regulatory bodies, ______ the shareholders, who feared prolonged uncertainty."

Which choice correctly completes the sentence?

Accepted Answer

alarmed

Answer

The simple past verb 'alarmed' is the most direct and stylistically clean choice. Options B, C, and D are all grammatically acceptable but introduce wordiness that the SAT Writing section penalizes. The SAT consistently rewards concise, active phrasing when meaning is not sacrificed. 'Was alarming to,' 'had the effect of alarming,' and 'served to alarm' all add unnecessary words without adding precision or nuance.

Question 2

A student writes: "Neither the project manager nor the engineers ______ fully reviewed the updated schematics before the presentation."

Which verb form correctly completes the sentence according to standard subject-verb agreement rules?

Accepted Answer

have

Answer

When 'neither…nor' connects a singular noun ('project manager') and a plural noun ('engineers'), the verb agrees with the noun closest to it — this is the 'proximity rule.' Since 'engineers' (plural) is closest to the verb, 'have' is correct. 'Has' would be correct if the plural noun were listed first. 'Had been' and 'were' introduce tense and aspect shifts not supported by context.

Question 3

Which of the following sentences contains a dangling modifier?

A) Having studied the migration patterns for decades, the ornithologist's conclusions were considered authoritative.
B) After reviewing the financial data, the auditors identified three discrepancies in the ledger.
C) Walking briskly through the fog, she nearly missed the unmarked turn.
D) Exhausted from the climb, the hikers rested at the summit before descending.

Accepted Answer

Sentence A

Answer

In Sentence A, 'Having studied the migration patterns for decades' is a participial phrase that must logically modify the subject of the main clause. However, the subject of the main clause is 'the ornithologist's conclusions' — conclusions cannot study migration patterns. The ornithologist did. This is a dangling modifier. Sentences B, C, and D all correctly place a logical actor as the subject immediately following the introductory phrase.

Question 4

The following sentence contains an error in parallel structure. Identify the corrected version:

Original: "The new policy requires employees to submit timesheets weekly, attending mandatory training sessions quarterly, and that annual performance reviews be completed."

Accepted Answer

The new policy requires employees to submit timesheets weekly, to attend mandatory training sessions quarterly, and to complete annual performance reviews.

Answer

Parallel structure demands that all items in a list share the same grammatical form. The original mixes infinitives ('to submit'), a gerund ('attending'), and a 'that' clause ('that annual reviews be completed'). Option A corrects this by using the infinitive form ('to submit,' 'to attend,' 'to complete') consistently. Options B and C mix different grammatical forms. Option D creates nominal phrases that are grammatically awkward and inconsistent in form.

Question 5

Choose the transition word or phrase that most precisely expresses the logical relationship between these two clauses:

"Early trials of the compound showed remarkable efficacy against antibiotic-resistant bacteria; ______, researchers caution that large-scale clinical application remains years away."

Accepted Answer

nevertheless

Answer

'Nevertheless' correctly signals a concessive contrast: despite the positive early results, researchers still urge caution. 'Therefore' implies the second clause is a logical consequence of the first — but caution is not a consequence of efficacy. 'Similarly' suggests likeness between the two ideas, which is incorrect here. 'In addition' indicates additive information, not contrast. The key is recognizing that the second clause counters the optimistic implication of the first.

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