Written Test Editing and Revision 3

Question 1

During revision, a writer realizes the thesis statement does not match the argument developed in the body paragraphs. What is the correct fix?

Accepted Answer

Revise the thesis to accurately reflect the argument in the body

Answer

The thesis must reflect the actual argument; revising it ensures cohesion between the claim and the supporting evidence.

Question 2

Which transition word best signals a contrast between two ideas?

Accepted Answer

However

Answer

'However' introduces a contrasting idea, while the other options signal addition or consequence.

Question 3

A sentence reads: 'The professor, who teaches biology, she gave a lecture.' What error does this contain?

Accepted Answer

Pronoun redundancy (double subject)

Answer

The subject 'professor' is repeated unnecessarily with 'she,' creating a double subject error.

Question 4

What is the purpose of a reverse outline during revision?

Accepted Answer

To check that each paragraph's main point matches the overall thesis

Answer

A reverse outline summarizes each paragraph after drafting to check organization and alignment with the thesis.

Question 5

Which sentence best demonstrates appropriate hedging language in an academic context?

Accepted Answer

This study suggests that exercise may reduce symptoms of depression.

Answer

Hedging words like 'suggests' and 'may' accurately represent uncertainty without overclaiming findings.

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