Written Test Editing and Revision 2

Question 1

Which revision strategy best addresses a paragraph that contains information relevant to two different main ideas?

Accepted Answer

Split the paragraph into two focused paragraphs

Answer

Splitting a paragraph ensures each main idea receives focused, organized treatment without confusion.

Question 2

A writer notices that every sentence in a paragraph begins with 'The.' What is the best revision approach?

Accepted Answer

Vary sentence openings by using transitions, participial phrases, or inverted structure

Answer

Varying sentence openings improves rhythm and prevents monotonous repetition.

Question 3

When editing, you find the phrase 'due to the fact that.' What is the best revision?

Accepted Answer

Replace with 'because'

Answer

'Because' is a concise, direct substitute for the wordy phrase 'due to the fact that.'

Question 4

Which of the following is an example of faulty parallelism?

Accepted Answer

They want to travel, seeing new places, and to meet people.

Answer

Mixing infinitives ('to travel'), a gerund phrase ('seeing'), and another infinitive ('to meet') breaks parallel structure.

Question 5

A writer uses the passive voice throughout a persuasive essay. What is the most likely effect?

Accepted Answer

The writing feels distant and reduces impact

Answer

Passive voice obscures the actor and weakens the directness needed in persuasive writing.

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