TMU Writing Excellence 3

Question 1

Which sentence is free of comma splice errors?

Accepted Answer

The library closes at nine; students should finish their work by then.

Answer

Option B correctly uses a semicolon to join two independent clauses, avoiding both a comma splice and a run-on sentence.

Question 2

What does 'concision' mean in the context of effective writing?

Accepted Answer

Conveying ideas using the fewest words necessary without sacrificing clarity

Answer

Concision means expressing ideas efficiently, eliminating unnecessary words while preserving meaning and clarity.

Question 3

Which of the following is an example of hedging language, commonly expected in academic writing?

Accepted Answer

The results suggest that exercise may reduce symptoms of depression.

Answer

Hedging language ('suggest,' 'may') acknowledges uncertainty and avoids overstating conclusions, which is standard in academic writing.

Question 4

A writer notices that a paragraph has three unrelated ideas. What is the best revision strategy?

Accepted Answer

Expand each idea into its own focused paragraph

Answer

Each paragraph should develop one central idea; splitting the paragraph ensures unity and allows each idea adequate development.

Question 5

Which sentence uses active voice?

Accepted Answer

The research team completed the report before the deadline.

Answer

In active voice, the subject ('the research team') performs the action; in passive voice, the subject receives the action.

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