A sporting goods retailer tests two descriptions for running shoes: Version A lists materials and weight; Version B opens with 'Run your next PR โ engineered for runners who want speed without sacrificing cushion.' Version B converts 28% better. This result is best explained by:
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A
Version B leads with an aspirational benefit that speaks directly to the target runner's goal
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B
Version B uses fewer technical terms that confuse shoppers
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C
Version B is shorter, which always improves conversion rates
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D
Version B avoids mentioning competitor products