An AWA test-taker writes the following sentence in their critique: "The argument's use of evidence is problematic." Which of the following revisions demonstrates the most improvement in clarity and precision?
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A
The argument uses evidence that is not very good and could be better.
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B
The argument's evidence is fundamentally flawed and generally unpersuasive.
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C
The argument bases its entire conclusion on a single, two-year-old survey from a competing town, which may not be relevant.
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D
The argument has some significant issues with the data it presents to support its main point.