A student revises the sentence 'The cat sat on the mat' to 'The sleek tabby sprawled lazily across the woven mat.' What is the primary effect of this revision?
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A
It changes the author's purpose from persuasive to informative
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B
It adds vivid detail that creates a clearer, more specific image
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C
It removes unnecessary information to improve conciseness
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D
It corrects a grammatical error in the original sentence