BCA Writing Skills 2

Question 1

Which sentence most effectively uses a transitional phrase to show contrast?

Accepted Answer

Despite studying diligently, she failed the test.

Answer

The phrase 'Despite studying diligently' signals contrast between effort and outcome, making the relationship clear.

Question 2

A student writes: 'The scientist made a discovery that was very important and very significant.' What is the primary weakness of this sentence?

Accepted Answer

It contains redundant words

Answer

'Important' and 'significant' are synonyms here, making their combined use redundant.

Question 3

Which revision best improves the clarity of: 'The report was written by my partner and I submitted it late.'?

Accepted Answer

My partner wrote the report, which I submitted late.

Answer

This revision uses a relative clause to cleanly separate the two actions and clarify who did what.

Question 4

In an argumentative essay, which paragraph structure is most effective?

Accepted Answer

Claim → Evidence → Analysis

Answer

Leading with a clear claim, followed by evidence and analysis, guides the reader through your argument logically.

Question 5

Which sentence correctly punctuates a nonrestrictive (nonessential) clause?

Accepted Answer

My sister, who lives in Boston, is visiting.

Answer

Nonrestrictive clauses are set off by commas on both sides because they add extra, not essential, information.

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